Saturday 25 January 2014

Focus On Life - Week 4

Week Four : Words

When the rain is gentle and the sun kisses the top of your head.

When the wind is a breeze that ruffles your hair.

When everyone is happy and fed and clothed and sheltered.

When the ground is still.

When I know where everyone is.

When it is safe, I can relax.

 


11 comments:

  1. Love this post and your word! I think I take feeling safe for granted. Thanks for reminding me not to!

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  2. What a truly lovely post - thank you :)
    xx

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  3. What a beautiful post Nelly. I love your editing too, it makes the word and it's definitions much more powerful.

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  4. Great editing and lovely sentiment.

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  5. Think safe is why I like summer better than winter.. I don't care if we have no power in the summer... I can drive without wondering if I'll get home.....

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  6. Nelly, what a great word. Love the way you focus the eye with your edits. It's definitely a word we can take for granted until we don't have it!

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  7. Nelly that is a great choice for your word. I like your editing.

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  8. This is a great way to portray our prompt. And the word safe is what it is all about!

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  9. A great choice. We all want to know we can be safe.

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  10. Aaaah, very good. So easy to take for granted

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